第十九天:大小写作 得分多多---小作文语言 格式以外,小作文的语言也很重要。除了一般作文的要求,如没有语法错误、用词丰富、句子结构有变化以外,小作文还有特殊的要求,如文体方面与交际方面的要求。下面以前一天的范文为例剖析这几点。 Dear Mr. Wang, I am writing to inform you about my decision to resign from my current position. There are a few factors involved that I find intolerable. First of all, the salary has proven to be much lower than you originally promised, and I have a large family to support. In addition, the office is located in the downtown area, yet I live in the suburbs, so it is exhausting for me to spend over three hours commuting every day. Most importantly, I feel rather disappointed and left out on the job itself, as in the past two months I was never given any really important responsibility. I sincerely hope that you approve of my resignation. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 一、遣词造句 首先,本文用词准确。例如,current position中的current, commuting中的commuting, responsibility中的responsibility。其次,句型多变。有并列句,如第二段首句。还有较多的复合句,包含主句与从句,如第二段的第二句与第三句。当然,衔接手段也很丰富,具体内容会在明天的总结中谈到。 |