十一. 备忘录 范文 Directions: Someone put forward a proposal to adopt the punch?in system in her memo in June 12, 2006. Write a memo to her with the information below. Your memo should be in no less than 100 words. To: Mr. Brown manager of operations From: Betty Green Supervisor Subject: comments on the punch?in system Date: September 21 This is further to your memo dated back to June 12, 2006, in which you proposed that the employees adopt the punch?in system. I fully agree with you that we should take measures to increase the productivity and that we would a tighter control over the employees if the punch?in system is adopted. However, honestly speaking, I don?t think that adopting a tighter system will increase productivity. The most effective way to increase productivity, in my opinion, is to give the employees more incentives to work. I think we could further discuss other possibility of achieving this goal. Your consideration of this suggestion would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Betty Green 译文 这是回复你2006年6月12日的备忘录,当时你建议所有的员工采用打卡考勤制度。 |