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英语六级待批改作文： In this chat, we learn about that people use cell phone is increasing speedy. Compared with 1999, it is more than twice in 2002.And 2005 compare with 2002 is twice times. We pay attention to new electronic technology which has been used into cell phone. It makes that many function like surfing Internet, taking photos, playing games, handling works, storing up files into cell phones, which makes our life convenient. When a kind of technology has been produced largely, its cost will be reduced. So, we always can use the most advanced cell phones with suitable price. In my opinion, so much electronic equipment that we use everyday will be changed into one terminal, I dont know what to call it, but it will have all current functions and we cant image out functions. 作文批改如下： In thischat（改为chart）, we learn about thatpeopleusecell phoneisincreasingspeedy（改为rapidly）. Compared with 1999, itismore than twice in 2002.And 2005 compare with 2002 is twice times. We pay attention to new electronic technology which has been used into cell phone. Itmakes that many function（make do是个固定搭配）like surfing Internet, taking photos, playing games, handling works, storing up files into cell phones, which makes our life convenient. When a kind of technology has been produced largely, its cost will be reduced. So, wealways can（改为can always）use the most advanced cell phones with suitable price. In my opinion, so much electronic equipment that we use every day will be changed into one terminal,｛I dont know what to call it｝, but it will have all current functions and we cant image out functions.（不能理解你的意思） | 
