养宠物 有些人认为养宠物很好 有些人认为养宠物不好 你的观点是什么? 本文共分三段。 第一段(34句话) 第一句话:提出主题 比如: 1.Recently with the development /advance/progress of science and technology, the phenomenon of pets has aroused wide concern. 2.Nowadays, it is undeniable that pets has almost become the biggest concern of the present-day world. 第二句话:翻译第一个提纲 比如:a part of citizens cling to the idea that keeping pets is beneficial to their daily life. 第三第四句话具体说明原委,为什么养宠物好 比如: 1.first, keeping pets can reduce the loneliness of many people ,especially the old and the children, who have to stay alone. 2.in addition, the pets are lovely, they can make you feel delighted when you go back to home. 第二段(34句话) 第一句话:过度语 比如:although the former is reasonable to some people, there are still these who claim that having animals at home is unacceptable. 第二句话:翻译第二个提纲 比如:they are of the opinion that keeping pets should be banned. |