|
5. 逻辑域错误。这个应该不难判断，但还是经常出错： If people become friends, both of them wont care about money... [可改为neither of them care about money...] 其他： 语义重复 In my opinion, I agree with the view that... [agree一词本身就表示说话人的观点，可将In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改为the view that... is right] share many common interests [common与share属同义反复，可改为have many common interests或share many interests] 论断过于绝对，缺乏足够思考 A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides... [相信富人也不至于笨到这个程度] 句义严重反复，缺乏变化 Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. [不必多说了] 连词错误 It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. [if一词显然应该是that，不过更通顺的说法应该是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.] | 
