增强英语六级写作语句表现力的有效方法

　　一、避免使用语意弱的be动词。

　　1.把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：

　　Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

　　Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape.

　　Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green.

　　2.将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：

　　1) Weak: The team members are good players.

　　Revision: The team members play well.

　　2) Weak: One workers plan is the elimination of tardiness.

　　Revision: One workers plan eliminates tardiness.

　　3.在以here或there开头的句子中，把be动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：

　　1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.

　　Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

　　2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.

　　Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.

　　二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：

　　1. Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.

　　Better: My supervisor sauntered past my desk.

　　2. Poor: She is a careful shopper.