第一段:陈述现状段 (小虹有话:文章的第1、2句;主要用来写当前的某个社会现状、趋势;共有5种开篇写法,没有固定的标准选哪种,选择一种容易下手的去写,我已经将相关话题都举出来了) 文章第一句话: 1)第一句的第一种写法:就某事,人们又热烈讨论 There is a heated discussion whether(通常用在选择性话题:是否年级小出国,是否有必要参加) they should live off campus or live together with other roommates. students should be asked to grade their teacher (是否学生应该要求给老师打分) students should take a part-time job in school (是否学生在校期间应该找兼职) 2)第一句的第二种写法:某事引发人们关注 (不用写事情的经过,用一个词儿代替事情过程) Recently,the problem of has aroused wide concern among the public Currently,he phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern among the public(酒后驾驶) Currently,the frequent job-hopping of graduates has aroused wide concern among the public.(跳槽) Currently,the problem of food safety has aroused wide concern among the public. (食品安全) 3)第一句的第三种写法:社会现象变成某个词(这种写法最大的魅力也是,将事件过程压缩成一个词!) |