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（六）连词方面的错误 作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。 One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies. If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies. 【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。 （七）搭配方面的错误 学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。记得在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。 1.However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle. However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle. 【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle. 2.In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it. In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it. | 
