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一、短句放在段首或者段末，可以揭示主题： As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 强烈建议：在文章第一段用一长一短开头;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句介绍主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式;文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 二、 主题句原则 三、 一 二 三原则 1)in the first place, in the second place, lastly 2)to begin with, furthermore, finally 3)to start with, in addition, finally 4)first and foremost, besides, last but not least 5)for one thing, for another thing 四、 短语优先原则 两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点;其二、凑字数 I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it. 五、 多实少虚原则 一定要多用实词，少用虚词。good, nice空洞，generous, humorous, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable形象。再比如：走出房间空洞的词是：walk out of the room | 
