在文章中使用借词 在文章的写作中,少运用一些general words,反而多增加specific images. 什么是general words和specific images那,例如说; car 就是general words,因为车的种类有很多。 而Benz SUV 就是specific images。 在考试的时候,多使用specific words可以帮助把物体解释的更清楚。读者也会获得更多的信息,使他们对你的文章更方便了解。 下面,让我们通过几个例子来证明; 例1;General: Tom got into his car and drove off. Specific: Tom leaped into his SUV and roared off. 例2;General: The writer wrote a three-page critique of the painting in which he said he did not like it. Specific: In his three-page critique, the art critic squeezed every drop of meaning- and enjoyment- out of the 3-inch by 3-inch pastel. General words 对人物,地点,和事物的介绍都无法给读者准备的信息,所以为了更清楚的说明,把这些名词都应该换成specific words. 例3;General: An old dog came up the street. Specific: An ancient, gray-muzzled golden retriever wandered up Bluebird Canyon Road. 例4;General: My coach illustrates the point about playing fairly. Specific: My basketball coach, Ms Berry, illustrates the essay- ists point about playing fairly. |