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SAT满分作文范例：http://sat.tiandaoedu.com/write/29889.html 在上面这篇文章里(OG 6分)我们可以很清楚的看出作者犯了一个错误：To my detriment I thought it would be a good idea to watch the movie in order to prepare. For two hours I studied Elizabeth Taylors mannerisms， attitude， and diction， hoping I could mimic her performance。她以为只要能够维妙维肖的模仿伊丽莎白 泰勒就可以得到那个脚色，出乎意料的是，导演竟然看穿了她，批评了她。最重要的是给了她一个很好意见：要演出自己的Maggie而不是泰勒的。 第二段转过来，作者好好吸取了失败的教训，在finalperformance中按照自己理解的方式去揣摩角色，给她赋予了新的生命( In order to develop my character， I planned out her life just as I thought it should be， gave her the voice I thought was right， and the rest of her character unfolded beautifully from there.) 用作者的话说这个角色就慢慢地展现在她面前。而最终的结果，可想而知，作者得到了前所未有的好评： My director told me after the first show that Rumors was the best work hed ever seen from me， and that he was amazed at how Id developed such a believable character.本来故事到这里应该结束了，可是作者继续升华，感谢自己之前犯下的错误，因为没有那个错误，就没有最终的成功。 | 
