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[SAT写作] SAT作文例子之Lance Armstrong

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  下面是一篇关于七届环法自行车赛冠军Lance ArmstrongSAT作文例子,在这篇SAT作文例子中,介绍了这位冠军生平的性格转变,和因此而得到的成功的事。下面我们一起来看看这篇SAT作文例子的详细内容吧。

  整个SAT作文例子的逻辑链是:曾经的Lance 很顽固,不听任何人的建议后来得了癌症改变自己的性格,变得比较cooperative最后战胜癌症,取得环法冠军。

  1) 曾经的性格

  He was stubborn. He didnt understand the strategy of holding a little energy in reserve.

  First race: 1990 Amateur World Championship in Japan. The race, held on a very hot day, was 115 miles long with a difficult uphill section. Chris wanted Lance to draft--- to stay behind other riders and save some energy for the end of the race. But Lance didnt listen to his coach. He was overconfident and quickly pedaled to a big lead. The lead grew to almost 90 seconds, but Lance was exhausting himself. He got tired and slowed down. His lead fell to a minute, than to 30 seconds. Soon the peloton had caught him. Lance couldnt mount a charge at the end. Hed to draft with him. By being selfish, Lance was isolating him.

  提示:比较粗鲁,自大,不给对手尊重,不和队员合作。

  2) 得癌症

  At the age 25, the doctor Reeves said that he suffered testicular cancer. The cancer had spread from his testicle to his lungs.

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