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这位同学的思路清晰，内容充实，选取的观点同大部分同学不一样。觉得我们应该坚持自己的态度。 开头段 1 观点While it is reasonably natural to think that adaptation makes people more flexible and easier to fit into a new environment, sometimes staying unchanged may help us achieve a goal of life. 2 解释原因 In some cases, it is better to stick to ones original goal and hold on. 不改变态度，坚持自己的目标，更有可以完成自己的理想。 3 结构提示 The example of Rachel Carson well illustrates my point. 中间段 提示：这位同学介绍的主人公Rachel Carson是美国生物学家和科学读物作家，1962年发表预言性著作《寂静的春天》，提醒世界注意农药在食物链中所起的破坏作用，被认为是环保运动史上有重大影响的著作。 这个人物的素材是她自己之前就准备过的，十分新颖。同时对于考官来说，一位美国作家的故事无疑较为亲切。 例子的题眼是：新环境坚持自己的态度成功 Carsons mother was a naturalist herself and bequeathed to little Carson a life-long love of nature and the living creatures. Carson was deeply influenced by her mother and was determined to dedicate her life to the cause of studying and protecting the natural world. | 
