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10月9日SAT作文成文 开头段：三句话写作法 1 观点 I prefer adjusting ourselves to new circumstances to remaining unchanged. 2 解释观点=提炼例子中的为什么 On some occasions, you have no way but to change yourself for new circumstances like cancer if you still have a dream yet to be realized. On the contrary, if you refuse to gear yourself towards new circumstances, hardly can you survive, let alone realizing dreams. 3 下文的结构提示 The story of Lance Armstrong, an American cyclist who overcame a deadly cancer, could well exemplify my point. 中间段 目的：把已经准备好的逻辑链条变成英文，注意两点 1) 细节 2) 适时点题 第一步：曾经的他 Raised in a single-parent family, Lance Armstrong lived with his mother for over 19 years until he found our his talent for cycling and decided to move out on his own so that he could join the American national cycling team under coach Chris Carmichael. However, he exhibited somewhat traits of a teenager who lacked parental love, such as rudeness and egoism. To be more specific, in 1990 Amateur World Championship in Japan, he ignored the suggestion of his coach Chris that he was supposed to save energy before the final charge. Actually, at that time, he quickly pedaled to a big lead in order to show up before all the competitors. However that charge consumed him too much energy. Finally, he finished eleventh. | 
