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GMAT考试准备的时候我们要重点关注作文部分，能写出一篇不错的GMAT作文是非常不易的。写作文要有不错的英语基础和写作技巧，小编这里给大家分享的是GMAT写作的范文点评： 原题： The following appeared as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods: Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they become more efficient. In color film processing, for example, the cost of a 3-by-5-inch print fell from 50 cents for five-day service in 1970 to 20 cents for one-day service in 1984. The same principle applies to the processing of food. And since Olympic Foods will soon celebrate its 25th birthday, we can expect that our long experience will enable us to minimize costs and thus maximize profits. 逻辑漏洞： 1. false analogy: The food industry is not analogous to the color film industry. 2.causal oversimplification: Other factors that may contribute t to the cost decline of the printing cost should be considered and ruled out. 3.gratuitous assumption: The conclusion of the argument is based on a gratuitous assumption that the company can minimize cost and maximize profit because the company has been conducted for 25 years. 范文： | 
