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[GMAT写作] GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文四三

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  27. Based upon a correlation between increases in movie violence and crime rates in

  cities, the author argues that to combat crime in cities we must either censor movies that

  contain violence or prohibit people who are under 21 years of age from viewing them.

  The author further argues that because legislators failed to pass a bill calling for these

  alternatives, they are not concerned with the problem of crime in our cities. The authors

  reasoning is unconvincing, since it suffers from two critical problems.

  To begin with, the authors solution to the problem rests on the claim that

  portrayals of violence in movies are the cause of crime in the cities. However, the

  evidence offered is insufficient to support this claim. A mere positive correlation

  between movie violence and city crime rates does not necessarily prove a causal

  relationship, in addition, all other prospective causes of city crime such as poverty or

  unemployment must be ruled out. As it stands, the authors solution to the problem is

  based upon an oversimplified analysis of the issue.

  Another problem with the argument is that the authors solution assumes that only

  persons under 21 years of age are adversely affected by movie violence. Ultimately, this

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