人人终身学习知识网~是各类综合知识资源信息分享,提升综合素质与提高知识技能的终身学习网络平台

 找回密码
 立即注册

QQ登录

只需一步,快速开始

微信登录

微信扫码,快速开始

[GMAT写作] GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文四十

[复制链接]

  30. In this argument prudent investors are advised to stop investing in hotels and

  invest instead in hospitals and nursing homes. The author cites two related trendsan

  aging population and a decline in hotel occupancyas grounds for this advice. To

  illustrate these trends, the author refers to another region of the country, where 20

  percent of the population is over 65 years old and where occupancy rates in resort hotels

  have declined significantly during the past six months. This argument is unconvincing

  in a couple of important respects.

  In the first place, the author provides no evidence to support the claim that the

  population as a whole is aging and that the hotel occupancy rate in general is declining.

  The example cited, while suggestive of these trends, is insufficient to warrant their truth

  because there is no reason to believe that data drawn from this unnamed region is

  representative of the entire country. For example, if the region from which the data was

  gathered was Florida, it would clearly be unrepresentative. The reason for this is

  obvious. Florida is populated by a disproportionate number of retired people over 65

  years old and is a very popular vacation destination during the winter months. Moreover,

回复

使用道具 举报

小黑屋/人人终身学习知识网~是各类综合知识资源信息分享,提升综合素质与提高知识技能的终身学习网络平台

Powered by 5wangxiao

© 2007-2021 5wangxiao.Com Inc.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表