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[GMAT写作] GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文四七

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  23. This speaker draws the conclusion that there is no need to substantially increase

  funding for Einstein High School. To support this conclusion, the speaker claims that

  Einstein has improved its educational efficiency over the past 20 years, even though

  funding level s have remained relatively constant. His evidence is that two-thirds of

  Einsteins graduates now go on to college, whereas 20 years ago only half of its students

  did so. This argument suffers from several critical problems.

  To begin with, we must establish the meaning of the vague concept educational

  efficiency. If the term is synonymous with the rate of graduation to college, then the

  statistics cited would strongly support the argument. But, normally we are interested in

  something more than just the numbers of students who go on to college from a high

  school; we also want to know how well the school has prepared students for a

  successful college experiencethat is, whether the school has provided a good

  secondary education. Thus, for the speaker the term educational efficiency must

  essentially carry the same meaning as educational quality.

  Given this clarification, one of the speakers assumptions is that the rate of

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