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[GMAT写作] GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文七十

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  20. Laboratory studies show that Saluda Natural Spring Water contains several of the

  minerals necessary for good health and that it is completely free of bacteria. Residents

  of Saluda, the small town where the water is bottled, are hospitalized less frequently

  than the national average. Even though Saluda Natural Spring Water may seem

  expensive, drinking it instead of tap waster is a wise investment in good health

  Sample Essay 1:

  The argument that drinking Saluda Natural Spring Water instead of tap water is a

  wise investment in good health is not entirely logically convincing, since it lacks certain

  supporting factors.

  Firstly, the argument assumes that Saluda Natural Spring Water is the major

  reason why residents of Saluda are less frequently hospitalized than the national average.

  However, there is little evidence that this water is the only difference between this place

  and the rest of the country. And the reason why people in other places are more

  hospitalized are numerous and varied. There are so many other factors that would bring

  people in other places to hospitals, such as accidents, food contamination, illnesses, etc.

  Secondly, the argument also assumes that the minerals in Saluda National Spring

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