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[GMAT写作] GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文三八

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  In this argument the author concludes that West Cambria can increase revenues

  and provide better care to accident victims by disbanding the volunteer ambulance

  service and hiring a commercial one. The author reasons that this change would yield

  additional revenues because service fees could be imposed for ambulance use. The

  author also reasons that the city would provide better service to accident victims

  because a commercial service would respond more quickly to accidents than a volunteer

  service would. The authors argument is flawed in two respects.

  To begin with, the authors plan for raising revenue for West Cambria is

  questionable. Unless the service fees are considerable or the accident rate is extremely

  high, it is unlikely that significant revenues will be raised by charging a fee for

  ambulance use. Consequently, revenue generation is not a good reason to disband the

  volunteer service and hire a commercial service.

  Next, the authors belief that better patient care would be provided by a

  commercial ambulance service than by a volunteer service is based on insufficient

  evidence. The fact that the commercial service in East Cambria has a lower average

  response time than the volunteer service in West Cambria is insufficient evidence for the

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