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[GMAT写作] GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文八二

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  8. Based upon a survey among workers that indicates a high level of interest in the

  topics of corporate restructuring and redesign of benefits programs, the author

  concludes that workers are not apathetic about management issues. Specifically, it is

  argued that since 79 percent of the 1200 workers who responded to survey expressed

  interest in these topics, the notion that workers are apathetic about management issues is

  incorrect. The reasoning in this argument is problematic in several respects.

  First, the statistics cited in the editorial may be misleading because the total

  number of workers employed by the corporation is not specified. For example, if the

  corporation employs 2000 workers, the fact that 79 percent of the nearly 1200

  respondents showed interest in these topics provides strong support for the conclusion.

  On the other hand, if the corporation employs 200,000 workers, the conclusion is much

  weaker.

  Another problem with the argument is that the respondents views are not

  necessarily representative of the views of the work force in general. For example,

  because the survey has to do with apathy, it makes sense that only less apathetic workers

  would respond to it, thereby distorting the overall picture of apathy among the work

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