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[GMAT写作] GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文三五

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  35. The financial-planning office at Fern Valley University concludes that it is

  necessary to initiate a fund-raising campaign among alumni that will enable the

  university to expand the range of subjects it offers and increase the size of its library

  facilities. It: argument is based on a five-year decline in enrollments and admission

  applications together with the claim that students cite poor teaching and inadequate

  library resources as their chief sources of dissatisfaction with Fern Valley. The

  conclusion of the financial-planning office is not strongly supported by the reasons

  given.

  To begin with, this argument depends on the assumption that providing a greater

  range of subjects and a larger library will alleviate the students chief sources of

  dissatisfaction. However, the students have not complained about inadequate course

  offerings or about the size of the library; their complaint is that the existing courses are

  poorly taught and that library resources are inadequate. Offering more kinds of classes

  does not improve teaching quality, and increasing a librarys size does nothing to

  enhance its holdings, or resources. Accordingly, the recommendation does not bear

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