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[GMAT写作] GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文二

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  60. This editorial argues that, since career advancement for scientists typically require:

  60 to 80 hours of work per week, affordable all-day child care must be made available

  to scientists of both genders if they are to advance in their fields. Moreover, the editorial

  urges that requirements for career advancement be made more flexible to insure that

  pre-school children can spend a significant amount of time each day with a parent. This

  argument is problematic in two crucial respects.

  The major problem with the view expressed in the article is that inconsistent

  recommendations are endorsed in the argument. On the one hand, scientists are urged to

  put their children in all-day child-care facilities in order to advance their careers. On the

  other hand, they are encouraged to spend a significant amount of time each day with

  their children. Obviously, scientists cannot be expected to adhere to both of these

  recommendations.

  Another problem is that the recommendations are based on the assumption that e

  or at least most. scientists have young or preschool-age children. But the editorial

  provides no evidence to support this assumption, nor is this assumption very likely to be

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