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[GMAT写作] GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文八六

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  4. In response to a coincidence between calling revenues and delays in

  manufacturing, the report recommends replacing the manager of the purchasing

  department. The grounds for this action are twofold. First, the delays are traced to poor

  planning in purchasing metals. Second, the purchasing managers lack of knowledge of

  the properties of metals is thought to be the cause of the poor planning. It is further

  recommended that the position of the purchasing manager be filled by a scientist from

  the research division and that the current purchasing manager be reassigned to the sales

  department. In support of this latter recommendation, the report states that the current

  purchasing managers background in general business, psychology, and sociology equip

  him for this new assignment. The recommendations advanced in the report are

  questionable for two reasons.

  To begin with, the report fails to establish a causal connection between the falling

  revenues of the company and the delays in manufacturing. The mere fact that falling

  revenues coincide with delays in manufacturing is insufficient to conclude that the

  delays caused the decline in revenue. Without compelling evidence to support the causal

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