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如何快速提升GMAT作文的写作技巧呢?下文将会对GMAT作文中Argument部分的写作方法及提升要点进行深入的分析，正在积极备战GMAT作文的同学们不妨来参考一下。 GMAT的6分范文，明确处理了其中的4个错误点： warning只是警告，如果飞行员没注意到，还会相撞: First, if the cause of the problem of midair plane collisions is that pilots are not paying attention to their computer systems or flight operation, the warning system will not solve the collision problem. onboard机载设备不具备强制性、权威性，飞行员可以选择是否执行 Second, If the pilot or flight specialist does not conform to what the warning system suggests, midair collision will not be avoided. Source:Veduchina computerized计算机可能会失灵 The argument also does not address what would happen in the event that the warning system collapses, fails, or does not work properly. commercial airlines没有排除与军队飞机或私人飞机相撞的可能性 Finally, if planes other than commercial airlines are involved in the collisions, the problem of these collisions cannot be solved by a warning system that will not be installed on non-commercial airlines. 通过对于6分范文的分析，可以体会到GMAT出题人对于短题目的考察，偏重于题目细节，希望考生能够细致的对题目进行分析、较全面的指出错误点。尽管这道题的错误类型很单一，只是因果错误，但是，如果不能够深入到细节的话，并找到过半的错误点，分数很难得到大幅提高。 | 
