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[GMAT写作] 新GMAT考生Argument写作实例点评

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  Argument的题目是:

  The following recommendation was made by the president and administrative staff of Grove Collegea private instituteto the colleges governing committee.We recommend that Grove College preserve its century-old tradition of all-female education rather than admit men into its programs. It is true that a majority of faculty members voted in favor of coeducationarguing that it would encourage more students to apply to Grove. But 80 percent of the students responding to a survey conducted by the students government wanted the school to remain all femaleand over half of the alumni who answered a separate survey also opposed coeducation. Keeping the college all-femalethereforewill improve morale among students and convince alumni to keep supporting the college financially.

  Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

  该考生Argument的全文如下(考生原创回忆):

  The recommendation made by the president and administrative staff of a private institution to the colleges governing committee claimed that the century-old tradition of all-female education are supposed to maintain instead of admitting men into its program. The claim seems to be well-reasoned and trustworthy at the first glancehoweverconsidering the weak evidence provided by the institutionthe conclusion is unconvincing and unreliable.

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