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[GMAT写作] GMAT作文:Argument范文精选(48)

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  The following appeared as a part of an advertisement for Adamswho is seeking reelection as governor. Re-elect Adamsand you will be voting for proven leadership in improving the states economy. Over the past year aloneseventy percent of the states workers have had increases in their wagesfive thousand new jobs have been createdand six corporations have located their headquarters here. Most of the respondents in a recent poll said they believed that the economy is likely to continue to improve if Adams is reelected. Adamss opponentZebulonwould lead our state in the wrong directionbecause Zebulon disagrees with many of Adamss economic policies. Discuss how well reasoned.。. etc.

  This political advertisement recommends re-electing Governor Adams because he has a proven leadership role in improving the states economy. In support of this reason the author cites these statisticsin the past yearmost state workers wages have gone up; 5,000 new jobs have been created; and six corporations have located in the state. Another reason offered for re-electing Adams is a recent pollwhich indicates that most respondents believe the state economy would continue to improve if he were re-elected. Finallythe author claims that rival Zebulon would harm the states economy because he disagrees with Adams fiscal policies. This argument is fraught with vagueoversimplified and unwarranted claims.

  To begin withthe statistics are intended to support the main claim that the state is economically better off with Adams as governor. But these statistics are vague and oversimplifiedand thus may distort the states overall economic picture. For examplestate workers pay raises may have been minuscule and may not have kept up with cost of living or with pay for state workers in other states. Moreoverthe 5,000 new jobs may have been too few to bring state unemployment rates down significantly; at the same timemany jobs may have been lost. Finallythe poll indicates that six new corporations located in the statebut fails to indicate if any left.

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