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[GMAT写作] GMAT作文:Argument范文精选(59)

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  The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine on lifestyles. Two years agoCity L was listed 14th in an annual survey that ranks cities according to the quality of life that can be enjoyed by those living in them. This information will enable people who are moving to the state in which City L is located to confidently identify one placeat leastwhere schools are goodhousing is affordablepeople are friendlythe environment is safeand the arts flourish. Discuss how well reasoned.。. etc.

  The author concludes that City L has good schoolsaffordable housingfriendly peopleflourishing arts and a safe environment. To support this claim the author cites an annual survey that ranks cities according to quality of life. Two years ago City L was listed 14th in this survey. As it stands this argument is unconvincing.

  Firstthe author fails to indicate what individual characteristics of cities were used as criteria for the ranking. To the extent that the criteria used in the survey were the same as the features listed by the author in the conclusionthe conclusion would be warranted. On the other handif the survey employed entirely different criteriafor exampleoutdoor recreational opportunities or educational achievement levels of adult residentsthen the authors conclusion would be wholly unwarranted.

  Secondlythe author provides no indication of how each characteristic was weighted in the ranking. For exampleCity L may have far and away the most flourishing arts scene among the cities surveyedbut it may have poor schoolsunfriendly peopleand an unsafe environment. The extent to which the survey accurately reflects City Ls overall quality of life in this case would depend largely on the relative weight placed on the arts as a factor affecting quality of life.

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