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[GMAT写作] GMAT作文:Argument范文精选(57)

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  The following appeared in a speech delivered by a member of the city council. Twenty years agoonly half of the students who graduated from Einstein High School went on to attend a college or university. Todaytwo thirds of the students who graduate from Einstein do so. ClearlyEinstein has improved its educational effectiveness over the past two decades. This improvement has occurred despite the fact that the schools fundingwhen adjusted for inflationis about the same as it was twenty years ago. Thereforewe do not need to make any substantial increase in the schools funding at this time. Discuss how well reasoned.。. etc.

  This speaker draws the conclusion that there is no need to substantially increase funding for Einstein High School. To support this conclusionthe speaker claims that Einstein has improved its educational efficiency over the past 20 yearseven though funding levels have remained relatively constant. His evidence is that two-thirds of Einsteins graduates now go on to collegewhereas 20 years ago only half of its students did so. This argument suffers from several critical problems.

  To begin withwe must establish the meaning of the vague concept educational efficiency. If the term is synonymous with the rate of graduation to collegethen the statistics cited would strongly support the argument. Butnormally we are interested in something more than just the numbers of students who go on to college from a high school; we also want to know how well the school has prepared students for a successful college experiencethat iswhether the school has provided a good secondary education. Thusfor the speaker the term educational efficiency must essentially carry the same meaning as educational quality.

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