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[GMAT写作] GMAT作文:Argument范文精选(41)

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  The following appeared in the editorial section of a corporate newsletter. The common notion that workers are generally apathetic about management issues is falseor at least outdateda recently published survey indicates that 79 percent of the nearly 1,200 workers who responded to survey questionnaires expressed a high level of interest in the topics of corporate restructuring and redesign of benefits programs. Discuss how well reasoned.。. etc.

  Based upon a survey among workers that indicates a high level of interest in the topics of corporate restructuring and redesign of benefits programsthe author concludes that workers are not apathetic about management issues. Specificallyit is argued that since 79 percent of the 1200 workers who responded to survey expressed interest in these topicsthe notion that workers are apathetic about management issues is incorrect. The reasoning in this argument is problematic in several respects.

  Firstthe statistics cited in the editorial may be misleading because the total number of workers employed by the corporation is not specified. For exampleif the corporation employs 2000 workersthe fact that 79 percent of the nearly 1200 respondents showed interest in these topics provides strong support for the conclusion. On the other handif the corporation employs 200,000 workersthe conclusion is much weaker.

  Another problem with the argument is that the respondents views are not necessarily representative of the views of the work force in general. For examplebecause the survey has to do with apathyit makes sense that only less apathetic workers would respond to itthereby distorting the overall picture of apathy among the work force. Without knowing how the survey was conductedit is impossible to assess whether or not this is the case.

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