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[GMAT写作] GMAT作文:Argument范文精选(35)

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  The following appeared in a memorandum from the business department of the Apogee Company. When the Apogee Company had all its operations in one locationit was more profitable than it is today. Thereforethe Apogee Company should close down its field offices and conduct all its operations from a single location. Such centralization would improve profitability by cutting costs and helping the company maintain better supervision of all employees. Discuss how well reasoned.。. etc.

  In this argument the author concludes that the Apogee Company should close down field offices and conduct all its operations from a singlecentralized location because the company had been more profitable in the past when all its operations were in one location. For a couple of reasonsthis argument is not very convincing.

  Firstthe author assumes that centralization would improve profitability by cutting costs and streamlining supervision of employees. This assumption is never supported with any data or projections. Moreoverthe assumption fails to take into account cost increases and inefficiency that could result from centralization. For instancecompany representatives would have to travel to do business in areas formerly served by a field officecreating travel costs and loss of critical time. In shortthis assumption must be supported with a thorough cost-benefit analysis of centralization versus other possible cost-cutting and/or profit-enhancing strategies.

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