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编辑点评： 新GRE写作新题库里的作文方面的一个重要变化是有了指导语。指导语的作用是有助于我们的逻辑性写作.从今天起小编就给大家连续提供新版GRE写作新题库argument部分的内容。希望大家能够在练习中提高自己的写作水平。 The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe. A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, the proposed new jazz club in Monroe, the C-Note, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe s annual jazz festival last summer; several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe; and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is Jazz Nightly, which airs every weeknight at 7 P.M. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument. 中文翻译： 在Monroe 建立爵士乐俱乐部将会是非常盈利的产业。当前，最近的爵士俱乐部也在65 英里以外;因此，我们筹建的俱乐部C Note 将会占有全部的本地市场。而且，爵士乐在Monroe 非常流行：去年夏天10 万多人参加了Monroe 的爵士音乐节，若干知名爵士音乐家居住在Monroe，Monroe 获评价最高的广播节目是平时每天播出的Jazz Nightly。最后，一项全国性研究表明典型的爵士爱好者每年花费近1000 元用于爵士娱乐。 | 
