编辑点评: 本文选自GRE出国考试写作指导:孙远作文笔记下载,是上过课的同学们自己整理而成的,内容很实用,希望对同学们的GRE作文备考有所帮助。 3. develop the body paragraphs one by one. 逐一展开问题段落,按重要性递减的规律展开 4. conclusion 5. checking 二、开头段的写作: 找出原论证的结论或主张,指出原论证的论据和假设,指出原论证的逻辑错误。 忠实的保留原始信息。 用自己的词保留原始信息。 In this argument / analysis, the arguer concludes / claims that ..To support / justify the conclusion , the arguer points out / provides the evidence that and that In addition , the arguer reasons that .. This argument suffers from several critical fallacies / flaws. 三、SURVEY 问题: 1. vague = misleading 2. question: what questions will ask in the survey? Loaded questions 有误导性的问题 3. Who 4. Average 平均数不适合于每个成员 5. Confusing causal relationship with correlation 混淆因果关系与相关性 Every causal relationship implies a correlation, but the statistical correlation does not necessarily implies a causal relation. |