新GRE作文的开头就是给阅卷官产生第一个直接好坏印象的地方,好的GRE作文开头往往就能给GRE考试高分打下了良好的基础,而一个差的GRE作文开头甚至会毁了一篇好的文章内容。 GRE作文失败开头之一:观点武断 态度强硬 典型失败案例:Topic1-The importance of confidence In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who dont have confidence, they all have failed. Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who dont obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, Im sure there will be no traffic problem any more. GRE作文失败开头之二:偏离主题无轨电车 典型失败案例:Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places. |