让自己的新GRE作文写的更具有渲染能力,就要灵活运用一些语法和可能简单的但是很地道的表达方式。下面就为大家进行GRE作文句子技巧的介绍,增强文章的表现能力,考生们认真练习GRE作文技巧,争取取得理想的新GRE作文效果。 一、避免使用语意弱的be动词。 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如: Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. 2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如: 1) Weak: The team members are good players.Revision: The team members play well. 2) Weak: One workers plan is the elimination of tardiness.Revision: One workers plan eliminates tardiness. 3、在以here或there开头的句子中,把be动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如: 1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists. 2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.Revision: The books you ordered have arrived. 二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。例如: 1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.Better: My supervisor sauntered past my desk. |