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[GRE写作] GRE写作:例举解析Argumen写作思路

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  arguement51The following appeared in a medical newsletter.

  Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician, were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment

  先看我同学是怎么写的,他的3段攻击大概是这样的:

  1.2个医生背景不同

  2.2个实验组的具体情况信息实在太少,不足以判断

  3.并不一定所有的病人都会发生2次感染

  想来他的思路具有一些普遍性,现在来看我说我的思路。

  要写好arguement,首先就是要学会读题目怎么读题目?不是单单找逻辑错误就完了的,你更要分析题目句子和句子间的逻辑关系。

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