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[GRE写作] GRE作文点评:有让步反对分层论述

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  Issue 3

  A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.

  The speaker would prefer a national curriculum for all children up until college instead of allowing schools in different regions the freedom to decide on their own curricula. I agree insofar as some common core curriculum would serve useful purposes for any nation. At the same time, however, individual states and communities should have some freedom to augment any such curriculum as they see fit; otherwise, a nations educational system might defeat its own purposes in the long term.

  这是一种不同于前两篇的开头:先陈述原文观点,再有让步地反对。我们要学习的好句子:I agree insofar as 在某种程度我同意此观点,因为 at the same time, however,接着陈述自己观点otherwise,

  Serve useful purposes for

  see sth. fit, 觉得合适;

  defeat ones own purpose

  in the long/short term

  A national core curriculum would be beneficial to a nation in a number of respects. First of all, by providing all children with fundamental skills and knowledge, a common core curriculum would help ensure that our children grow up to become reasonably informed, productive members of society. In addition, a common core curriculum would provide a predictable foundation upon which college administrators and faculty could more easily build curricula and select course materials for freshmen that are neither below nor above their level of educational experience. Finally, a core curriculum would ensure that all school-children are taught core values upon which any democratic society depends to thrive, and even survivevalues such as tolerance of others with different viewpoints, and respect for others.

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