再次深刻感觉到,GRE作文,对于大家的难点其实是逻辑,再给一篇我刚改过的文章,希望你们能有所体会 TOPIC: ISSUE212 - If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable. WORDS: 378 TIME: 00:45:00 DATE: 2009-8-16 23:58:32 Whether a goal deserves attaining depends on whether its worthiness overweigh the price of means taken to achieve it. Means that cost too much or illegal is surely unreasonable. However some spiritual goals, whose value is hard to tell, any means, if only legal, ethical, and out of personal will, is justifiable. Firstly, some goals are unrealistic current condition or in the short-term. Methods that expect to reach the goal in quick step are unfeasible since they could hardy solve the essential problem and might cause more problems. Consider the goal to minish the poverty gap, which is beneficial to the stability in society. But if the goal is to reach by taxing a large amount of on the affluent groups and transfer it to the proles, the wealthies would consider it unfair and try to elude that tax. The endeavor are likely to be null. Another unjustifiable mean is to lay a lump sum of money to each person, thus the money they owns would reach more average level. However, the sudden inflation caused by that policy would cause raise nominal interest and other economic index, which could cause unpredictable fluctuation in economy. |