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下面的是ETS对它的评论 This is an outstanding response, even though it is not quite finished. The writers views on the issue are so cogent, well articulated, and well developed that the writer was not penalized for failing to provide a conclusion. What matters is the quality of thinking and writing displayed, not whether an essay is totally finished or has a certain number of words. 这一段对作者的文笔评论的好The writers skill is apparent in the opening lines. The first words, For our grandparents it occurred, immediately spark the readers interest. The quick repetition of sentence structure and, once again, the intentionally vague use of it effectively draw the reader in. By the third sentence, we know that this essay will address the complexity of the issue and that the writer is fully in command of this discussion. 对于历史的深刻了解~这个是我们很难做到的The rest of the essay addresses the influence of historical events and media on the values of modern society, from the roaring twenties to the sixties and seventies. Insightful analysis accompanies the historical references. For example, the writer persuasively argues that prominent figures advanced their social agendas by capitalizing on the power of the media to change public opinion. 这里也是对于语法句法的评论Throughout the essay, the writer uses language and syntax effectively. Word choice is precise , sentences are structured to communicate ideas clearly , and transitional phrases help move the argument forward | 
