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[GRE写作] GRE作文入门和进阶二十四

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  In this argumentthe arguer recommends us to use Adamsone of the two leading real estate firms in our townto sell our homes if you want to instead of Fitchthe other leading one. To justify his conclusionthe arguer provides the clear evidence that Adams has 40 real estate agents in contrast to the number 25 of Fitchand even many of which are only part-time. In additionhe cited the fresh statistics of revenues of both Adams and Fitchwhich respectively are $168,000 and $144,000. To make it more conceivablethe arguer even lists out a self-experienced case to exhibit the superior sell speed of Adams to Fitch. Although all the evidences above seem reasonablea careful examination of this argument would reveal how groundless it is.

  In the first placethe arguer unfairly assumes Adams service is better than Fitchs with the assumption that more agentsmore satisfaction. The 40 agents in Adams might be poorly trained and unqualified with an extremely low work efficiencythus enlarging the number of the agents is the only feasible compensation. While Fitchs 25 agents may be well trained and be rich in experiencealthough many of them work only part-timeunder the present work condition it is enough. And also the quality of the service cant be oversimplified to only a factor of the number of employeeswhichin our common sensehas no necessary correlation. It is some other things should be taken into considerationsuch as social reputationthe feedbacks of customers and the companys culture and spiritualto avoid making the assertion too unwarranted.

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