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[GRE写作] GRE作文入门和进阶二十六

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  145.A new study collected data that shows that people who snore are more likely to gain weight than are people who do not snore. It is well known that many people who snore also stop breathing frequently during the night for a few secondsa condition called sleep apnea. The interruption of breathing wakes the person-often so briefly that the waking goes unnoticedand can leave the person too tired during the day to exercise. Anyone who snoresthereforeshould try to eat less than the average person and to exercise more.

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  In this argumentthe arguer make a proposal that anyone who snores should try to eat less than the average person and to exercise more. In order to prove his claimsa new study collected data has been quoted that people who snore are more likely to gain weight than are people who do not snore. in additionthe arguer also shows a common sense to support the conclusionwhich says that sleep apneaa condition caused by snorecan wakes the sleeping person often and leave him too tired to exercise during the day.

  The explanation of the conclusion sounds quite plausible at the first glancebut after pondering deeply upon the matterwe may find that the arguer fails to build up a causal relationship between the sentific study and the the conclusion as presented abovefurthermorethis argument also suffers from critical logical confusionHow can the person who is too tired to exercise join even more aerobic activities during the dayTo reveal the flaws of the argument more clearlylet us detail the examination.

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