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名师点评网友BEC初级作文(1)

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  本期作文题目:

  You are the office manager at an insurance company. You have arranged for contractors to upgrade your computer system. This means the system will be shut down for a full day.

  Write a memo of 40-50 words:

  informing staff of the shutdown

  telling them when it will happen

  asking them to prepare alternative work for the day.

  老师提示:

  商务写作中遵循的原则是:简洁,精确,礼貌。在考试中或者工作中,格式基本已经 给出,所以只需要我们写正文即可。正文中我们写作要做到选词精当,一针见血,语法正确,不出低级错误的句子。备忘录属于半正式的文体写作,所以在句子选择 上可以适当放宽,不必太正式。

  网友作文一:

  MEMORANDUM

  from : Tom TO : all staff

  date : 25/8

  Because our computor system will be upgraded by the contractors on 28 AUGUEST, so the system will be shut down for a full day on that day[1], i ask for you prepare alternative work for the[2] day. and the work dont use computer system .

  I think you can give a good performance to me to pass the accident. [3]

  TOM

  名师修改意见:

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