所谓垂悬结构(The Dangling Construction)就是一个句子成分,如分词短语,不定式动词短语等,找不到被修饰的主语或被修饰的对象不合逻辑。垂悬结构是种错误的句法,应该避免。 下面是三种常见的垂悬结构及其改正方法: ⒈垂悬分词或分词短语,如: ① Climbing up the hill, several boars were seen. 这句子里的现在分词短语(present participial phrase)修饰主语several boars是错的;改正方法有二: (a)确定是逻辑主语,使句子变成Climbing up the hill, the explorers saw several boars. (b)把现在分词短语扩大为副词分句(也称状语从句):When the explorers climbed up the hill, they saw several boars/ several boars were seen. ⒉垂悬副词短语,如: ② After putting a shrimp on the hook, the fish began to bite. 这句的副词短语(adverb phrase)和主语the fish有什么逻辑关系呢?真正的逻辑主语应该是the fisherman或the angler才对。改正方法和例①同: (a) After putting a shrimp on the hook, the fisherman found that the fish began to bite. (b) After the fisherman had put a shrimp on the hook, the fish began to bite. |