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E度英语网专稿 未经允许不得转载 The Volunteer is a very wonderful and significant occupation in our daily life . There is no doubt that it is meaningful. Thus,I think itis good to be a volunteer to help others who gets into trouble. But someone in the society thinks that it is awastes of our time to be a volunteer. Maybe, something else is better worthdoing, we would rather earn more money than be a voluntary people. It is no good being a volunteer.they said. To be honest, I do not agree with their views. Obviously, they are too selfish to face the life they are owning now. In my opinion ,To be a volunteer isa good wayfor us to enioy the colorful life , it whichis good for you, good for me and good for everyone. Think it over, my friends. To be a volunteer is not only enrichs our life ,but also help usmake many friends with others. Therefore, please do not act from selfish motives. The important old chinese saying tells us that GOOD MIND,GOOD FIND. I think that it will be with you if you ambition your value of your life. 本文讨论了参与是否参与志愿工作的话题，从正反两个方面来论证，论点清晰，结构清楚。引入-反驳-论证-升华的套路放在这里很实用，希望继续发扬。但是用词较为生硬，有少量语法错误，希望继续改进。 Jack 张 批改老师：Jack 张 | 
