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明明都背了那么多范文和模板，写了这么多习作，但雅思写作为什么还是5分？我都这么努力了，考官他不造吗！ 【学生习作节选】 Nowadays, a increasing number of people concerned about the enhancement of public services. However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services other than waste money on arts is controversial issue. In my view, public service are vital to our life, but spending money on arts is definitely not just waste money。 不看不知道，一看吓一跳！这短短3句话共53词的开头段里，密布着8处语法错误，这在雅思写作评分标准中的 语法准确性一条上自然会大打折扣。 下面我们就挨个来八一八这些看似微小，但却决定了雅思写作成败的细节问题，也请各位烤鸭对号入座！ 【细节一】冠词的使用 1. 原文：Nowadays, a increasing number ofpeople.。. 诊断：元音单词increasing前的不定冠词应用an而不是a。这样的错误在口语中不容易犯，但写到纸上时就容易忽视。所以说，写完的作文不仅要重看，更要重读，才能借助语感揪出这样的小错误。 修改：Nowadays, an increasing number ofpeople.。. 2. 原文：However, whether the government... on arts is controversial issue。 | 
