① 淡化模板痕迹:避免使用clich:不要上来就写every coin has two sides:不要上来就写every coin has two sides. / as it is widely accepted / as we all know 括号里的表达法推荐使用。 ② 大量的使用了形式主语和灵活句式: 例如 It must be stressed out that 必须强调指出 It is fairly difficult to say that It is not completely true to say that It is conceivable that 可以想象 ③ 首段一般是:1)改写题目,介绍文章背景;2)提出争议焦点;3)明确表明作家的观点 ④ 1)再解释2)举例子3)反证法是展开分论点的三个重要的方法 1). 再解释:In other words ;To be more specific=specifically ;That is to say 2). 举例子:To illustrate ;A case in point is that ;An obvious example is that 3). 反证法:While ;Conversely ;On the contrary ⑤ 有3-5个亮点的词汇或是短语 Optimize 使得最优化= improve Gorgeous 美丽的 = beautiful Maximize 使最大化= Multiply ⑥ 一般的思路是1)客观平衡写 2)让步支持或是让步反驳 3)分析问题解决问题,并且在尾段明确提出观点,也可以提出建议。 |