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考试的评分标准包括四个方面： Task Response Coherence and Cohesion Lexical Resource Grammatical Range and Accuracy 雅思的4Gates就是其评分标准，分别为内容，逻辑结构，语法的准确使用和范围以及词汇量四个标准。根据下面的全面修改案例，读者可以清楚的看到一篇5.5分的雅思范文是如何在修改之前蜕变成为高分作品。 Cambridge 8 Test 2 Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 原文： Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. Yes, the technology has changed the peoples interaction in very enhanced manner. Earlier people use to wait and try to find easy way to contact their friends or relatives leaving far. In past there was no quick technology to contact or to establish any communication between one person to another person. The drawback with past communication systems was that it were very slow and were time taking process such as telegrams, letter etc. People used to afraid to write their personal feedbacks or things to their love ones due to insecure medium of communication. When it comes to professional level, the privacy and accuracy should be maintain but, to that time there were no secure communications. | 
