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英语写作重要的是避开中式思维，如果是这样的开头，那么...一起来看看我们评出来的十大见官死开头吧。 见官死开头之一：废话连篇不知所云 典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? This topic is very interesting. Im very interested in talking about this topic. Because Im also a college student and Im not married 修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题 In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married. Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life. Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isnt it? Of course! Its really very very important! 见官死开头之二：中式英文 人见人晕 典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily | 
