句子、词语。文章由句子组成,句子由词语组成。在着手写文章之前,应该提醒自己注意下面几点 指代不清 指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句: mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. 读完上面这一句话,读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确,意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为: mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid. 例 常见联词 表层进 first, firstly to begin with/second, secondly to start with/third, thirdly whats more/also and then/and equally important/besides in addition/further in the first place/still furthermore/last but not the least/next besides/too moreover/finally 表举例 for example for instance/to illustrate as an illustration/after all/ 表解释 as a matter of fact/frankly speaking/in this case namely/in other words 表总结 in summary in a word/in brief in conclusion/to conclude in fact/indeed in short/in other words /of course/it is true specially/namely in all/that is to summarize/thus as has been said/altogether in other words/finally in simpler terms/in particular that is/on the whole to put it differently/therefore |