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[雅思英语写作] 雅思写作5分范文与7分范文对比

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  Lets compare two answers to a question.The topic is as follows:

  International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

  A Poor Essay - The following is a band 5 essay.

  International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

  In my opinion advantages outweight the disadvantages. Firstly, many countries like Egypt or Tailand live from tourism Lots of people work there as a seilsmens or tourist guides. These countries without support of tourists wouldnt be able to funtcion properly.

  Secondly, in countries visited by tourists are plenty of places where people just cant pass because of rare animals or plants.

  Another thing is that people like traveling and seeing new exotic places. They like lie on the beach or swim in ocean.

  Furthermore, tourism is now more growing industry highering tousands of people. There are makeing new places to work and to have fun.

  But on the other hand, people often forget that they arent the only beings on the planet.

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